Okay, but as someone who writes, you really do NOT need to go through blow by blow of actions when writing fights. Fights, in reality, DO NOT LAST LONG. Gun fight, fist fight, sword fight. 15 minutes tops.
So you shouldn’t have three chapters of nothing but Dudely Dude trying to get Eviley Evil on the floor.
Concept: a character designer who’s horny on main but only horny for his male characters and not his female characters
Female characters: *short fat woman, tall thin lanky woman, average height woman with muscles a lil chub, woman with a pear shaped body, old hunched over woman, non humanoid character*
not to sound too millennial here but it annoys me so much when I’m at a restaurant and someone I’m with will complain about the service being slow like buddy pal it’s fine it’s not that important
You didn’t waited 40 minutes for a dinner before haven’t you?
it takes years to develop your craft. do not romanticize the idea of an ‘overnight success’. be a student. grow organically. get really good. hate your work. start over. find new ways to express the same ideas. the student becomes the master. your time will come.